TRAGEDY

by N8   Mar 29, 2005


The first day we met
should of been the last.
I never should of let
you be more then just my past.

Your pretty face drew me in
but your personality put you in my heart.
You are my addicting sin
a never ending race after you start.

You led me in then kicked me out
was this your idea of a fun game?
Making me doubt...(life)
making me feel all this shame

How can you be
so damn heartless?
Acting like you liked me
but maybe I missed???

Did I mess up?
Missing my shot?
No! That can’t be!?! shut up!
For you I would of fought
against all odds.

Winning seemed one step away
losing wasn’t a choice
but all you wanted to do was play
so when I won you would not rejoice

So in the end I guess
You played me the best.
I never stood a shot.
There are a lot of fish in the sea
but you were the best I caught.
How did you play me
so good I couldn’t tell.
Even when it was right in front of me
I never realised you made me fail.
I was in a pit for a day
before I noticed I had fell.
So now I think as I lay,
was it worth it?
should I even
give a shit?
How can I not care?
Of course it was worth it!
I guess life’s not fair
then you die
so Good bye.......

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  • 19 years ago

    by deepworthlurv

    oh.... absolutely beautiful nate!! haha i really really really loved this one!!! gud job!!

  • 19 years ago

    by XxCamyxX

    This is a SUPER WONDERFUL POEM!!! i luuuuv it!!! *5* keep ut the fantastic work! (i'm sorry if this is a true story)

  • 19 years ago

    by |[ThUg AnGeL 4LyF]|

    heya N8 i alreadi commented on dis poem but i jst wanna fank u 4 da new comment n fanx 4 da advise it reali means alot=)
    luv u alwayz
    coddie

  • 19 years ago

    by ºCrimsonTearsº

    Really good poem, I'm sure alot of people can relate. No-one deserves to be treated like sh*t, U can do much better than her I'm sure.
    Take care,
    Shell

  • 19 years ago

    by Jaime

    What ya mean it don't make sense? I understood it, it's sad. You don't deserve to be treated like that. Anyways, it was a great poem--5/5 and two thumbs up. ^_^
    Love always,
    Jaime