Memories

by Alex   Mar 30, 2005


Seeing tears
Fall from here face
Pulling back her hair
As she sits with grace

Feeling nothing
As she pulls out the blade
Feeling empty
As memories fade

Memories of family
Memories of friends
Memories of happiness
As she crys for the end.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    Unlike the others, I think the last lines were better than the first. But maybe you should get some feelings into the poem like how does she feel about it? I mean that would make it more emotional and not just words on paper. But anyway, you still did a good job. The last lines were great because they're so simple. Keep on writing, take care.
    Satuxxa

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    WOW amazing, I totally love it...Can't believe how much your poems reminds me of the feelings I have inside!!! Keep writing, you have talent!!!

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