Whats wrong?

by Alex   Mar 30, 2005


Whats the point in holding my tears
Whats the point in hiding my fears

When you ask me whats wrong
I reply "Nothing I'm fine"
But you just don't get it
You just don't understand

I'm so close to screaming
When you go to ask me again
I just want to cry
I don't want to show you my pain

But you cant leave it at that
All you can say is
"I know your not fine
What is wrong?"

In my head I scream
"I WANT TO DIE CANT YOU LEAVE ME ALONE"
But yet I force a smile
then as they turn away

I would always wonder
If I sat and cried as they walked away
Would they help or just ask the question
"Whats wrong"

**not really a poem but I sat and wrote it based on what every single one of friends do to me**

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  • 19 years ago

    by Samie

    The best poems are the ones that just flow out of ur head....and that was a great poem...if u would of cryed as they walked away they would come back and asked wut wrong...trust mee...but hope things get better for u...keep writting poems is the best way to get things out and get a point across

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    "When you ask me what's wrong
    I reply "Nothing I'm fine"
    I can really relate to that part of the poem! Have said that many times and I just wanted to scream I am not fine! I really hope things will gewt better for u! I have been lucky and things are now going well! It takes time but hold on good things will come ur way! Another sad poem that showed true feelings I always like that! Take Care! Brooke

  • 19 years ago

    by Mandy-Rae

    It was alright. I think everyone has felt this way. Trying to stay strong and put on a face, acting as though nothing is wrong. Keep it up.

  • 19 years ago

    by *liZ*

    its from your heart and has a flow though it isn't like a normal poem structure.
    i still enjoyed it.
    5

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    I relate to your pain....and this is a vertý deep poem, straight from your heart!!! love it!!!