by EpithetPoet Mar 30, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
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Through all the lies we wade through |
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whoah, i really liked this one, really has me thinking/wondering. |
by Andrea
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wow! amazing write...i love it and it does make me think. lol, now when i go home i'm gunna look in the mirror and ask that question...wonder what my answer will be. excellent poem!! and of course this deserves a 5 out of 5. |
by Hina
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Good job! Love the words, maybe a more balanced rhythm would do it better. |