You Deserve Better

by Kalika   Mar 30, 2005


You don’t deserve,
To be put through hell.
She treats you so bad,
It’s only me you tell.

You’re such a wonderful person,
I truly love you in every way.
But I don’t understand why you’re with her,
Don’t understand why you stay.

Told you before to leave her,
She doesn’t deserve you at all.
You are such a sweet person,
And she’s doing everything to make you fall.

I know that you care about her,
But, look, she doesn’t care for you.
I know that you love hre so much,
Yes, I know that your love is true.

But, hunny, open up your eyes,
She really doesn’t care.
She causes you to cry at night,
To constantly pull at your hair.

But, hey, I’ll always be here for you,
No matter what you choose.
But trust me, if you stay with her,
Only you will be the one to lose.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Let's get my ignorance out of the way first. In the very last line, it seems like there's just too many words. As I said, it's probably just me, but I figured i'd let you know.

    Now for the good stuff. Once again, you've pulled off a wonderful poem that, I would assume, nearly everyone can relate to. I commend you.

  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie84

    That is so sweet!! They can NEVER see what's really going on...Nice write!!! 5/5