Cutting

by StormySkies   Mar 31, 2005


Let me see it hit the floor
Drip, drop, and splatter
Let it all be washed away
My life doesn't really matter.
I can't take it anymore
I don't want to do this
Everyday, waking up
Please, no more it's torture.
Let it stop, let it end
I don't want to think about it anymore.
Not just drops but waterfalls
Let it all flow out
Bleed this weakness out of me
Let the pain be gone
till there is nothing left
No more pain to deal with
No more weakness.
Life forever washed away
No redemption for my soul.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Br0k3N

    awesome poem... i'm sure there are alot out there that feel the same

  • 19 years ago

    by StormySkies

    When writting this poem, I had intentionally wanted it to rhyme, as you can see in the first few lines. Then I started putting reall emotion into it, and I watched it quickly spiraling out of my control. It turned into this. I never changed it because I love it. It represents me so well. Calm and in control at first, predictable, but then racing off into this mess that depression has dragged me into.

  • 19 years ago

    by shannon

    wow.. i loved it alot..a five out of five

  • 19 years ago

    by Unloved ♥

    I love it too!! becareful..great poem

    Unloved ♥

  • 19 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    This is a great poem. Only one suggestion, you could have kept the rhyme going throughout or just lost it all together, but that's all. But don't change it, it's still good. Keep it up!

    Love,
    Tiff

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