That night when the blood wouldn't stop

by StormySkies   Apr 7, 2005


Blood so red
Through my fingers
Through the shirt
Through the towel
More, more
It won't stop
Seeping through
Dizzy, lost
and so cold
Too deep
So much
Yet I want more

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  • 19 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Short, but good. Love this part:

    It won't stop
    Seeping through
    Dizzy, lost

    I get dizzy spells lots, so I know how that feels. Keep it up hun.

    Love,
    Tiff

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Showed true emotion! I hope u will be ok! U write very well! Take Care of yourself! Brooke 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Liam

    woah, excellent, extemly strong and meaningful but so short at the same time, brilliant job!

  • 19 years ago

    by Georgi

    wow sooooo short n sweet i LOVE IT! reely gets the point across and relates to all cutters. brilliant i loved it xxxxx

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