Prisoning Thoughts

by Martin   Apr 2, 2005


Something is troubling you; it is easy to tell,
You act so different, to me your unwell.
Hurt in your eyes, pain in your heart,
Your feeling so low, you have a missing part.

You do not tell me, you do not share,
I am deeply worried, filled with despair.
I just want to know what is there inside,
What is nagging you, deep within mind?

I am hurting for you, and that is so true,
Is that what it is bothering you?
That I think for you with care and love,
Like some kind angel, sent from above?

I will not give up, I am bleeding tears,
Please just tell me, and help prevent my fears.
Do not say nothing, do not clam,
I would do anything for you, my darling girl, Sam.

*A girl called Sam, put this onto her poem list, and it is actually mine! She put it on there, as i could not get on this site, so thankyou Sam or † Hidden Tears † for putting it up!*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie84

    I read your post on the discussion board introducing yourself so I figured I'd come check out your poems....Very nice write!!! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Martin

    Thankyou for that!
    Maybe it is because i am new, and nobody wants to read them as they think i may not be good!
    I've had around 50 visits though... maybe people can't be bothered, but thankyou for commenting! =)