Comments : Silent Angel

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Wow that was brilliant, i loved the flow and i was so descriptive and moving.
    this line however
    *Over time their voice has shrunk*
    i think should read
    *Over time their voices have shrunk
    or
    *Over time their voices begin to shrink.
    now they've become dimished.*

    Just a thought and once again i love your ending it makes you think about everything that's you've read, It was amazing 5*5.
    Tash
    xoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by Confused Angel

    It was excellent!! Good job and keep writing 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by KN

    Hey.. I love this poem. The last verse gave me chills. You have talent. But I would just like to know.. what exactly is a silent angel? Maybe I missed it (I have a tendency of being slow.) But it does sounds interesting. Keep writing :D

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ*KiM*ღ

    Lol a silent angel is someone who has kept everythin locked up and ended up killing themself basically coz it got 2 hard...ok so maybe it woznt that easy 2 spot...u wernt bein slow :P

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley

    wow this was REALLY good!

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥CRIMSONxX♥

    Wonderful poem, Keep up the good work..xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    well written dark poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    This is my favorite poem of yours, seems to have something special. Well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    With their hurt on their own..is what that line should be I think. It was agood poem

  • 18 years ago

    by rachel

    nothin 2 say xcept, wow wat an amazin poem xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    Very nice poem! I really like it! 5.0

  • 18 years ago

    by Sean

    Very amazing, there are far too many silent angels in this world...

  • 18 years ago

    by EoB

    The Silent Angel sits and cries
    Blood dripping down their wrist
    Even though they become weak
    Still drawing they persist

    I like how you use the words "silent angel" in the first line in every stanza...nice job=)

    keep it up

    That was the best part...

    AT times, a beautifully written poem with an excellent flow...but nevertheless, the flow does not seem perfect all the time, and the rhymes seem a little forced..

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    flow is a bit off....nice idea though i enjoyed it....4/5 keep it up...thanks for the comments on my poem...:) luv yas mwah

    -kayla-

  • 18 years ago

    by Sourav

    Brilliant poem! So nicely written! It'a very touchy!! Just loved it!

  • 18 years ago

    by noraida

    WOW! Beautifull very deep loved it 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Avellana

    Cool. I love the them. and the line-

    Not everyone could have missed this
    Somebody must have known.

    Lv A, x

  • 17 years ago

    by jello

    This is pretty good!

  • 17 years ago

    by brit

    I thought it was a very good poem :) good job

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Mmmmwhat ah fabulous poems u make me feel good hehe u do a good job i was enjoyed thanks