Unasked For

by Ð맆îñ¥   Apr 3, 2005


Please stop your lying
Reveal words you’re hiding
Cos I keep on finding
And I’m sick of trying

I’m being torn apart
You’re cutting me in half
Think on my behalf
Have pity on my heart

I’m becoming a ghost
You’re breaking my zone
Hypnotised when you boast
Sick of your weary drone

Pity unasked for is not given
Look where, in your anger, I have been driven
Stood on the edge, I think I’ll give in
At this last stand, am I forgiven?

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  • 19 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    Well Written Jemma!! Great Work:) Keep it up! God Bless You! *5/5*
    -x-Sedusha-x-

  • 19 years ago

    by Bogie

    Dang!!! Girl, with a write like that
    I hope you got him back.
    Excellent show of emotion with
    smooth flow. Great job well done,
    Write On.

  • 19 years ago

    by sinister

    Thanks for the votes and comments. Really does mean alot. You're a good writer yourself. It one's really nice

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Excellent write, destiny.
    5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

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