Love?

by David Paul   Apr 4, 2005


The words just don't flow like the other day,
I can't think exactly of what I need to say,
I just can't feel that spark that at once I knew we had,
The fact that its not there just makes me so mad,
We used to be like the best of friends,
Even when we were mad there was no need to make amends,
We were in love and thats how we begin.

Why can't I love you the way you love me,
When we talk I only think "why can't you let me be,"
Its just not the same as when you lived down here,
When we way, "I love you" its not as strong or clear,
I begin to wonder if our "love" was even there,
Is it you that is the one that I really care,
The future is extremely hard for me to see.

Love isn't a word that would describe us now,
In reading this poem I know you'll ask how,
How can I say that were not in love,
I don't know how, your an angel from above,
Its just so amazing how you float you don't walk,
How your voice holds me captive every time we talk,
I'm sorry that we have to end like this,
I love you? I don't know but its you that I'll miss.

Its a poem I wrote a while back but it has a lot of my emotions in it. I wrote this when I broke up with my girlfriend. I'm sorry Lauren.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    Great, i liked that. Seems like a lot of your poems are about love and lost love, maybe try writing some more about other things. But anyway, good poem, I liked this one a lot too! Keep writing,
    Satuxxa

  • 19 years ago

    by Unrequited

    another great one!

  • 19 years ago

    by Rebecca

    This was a good poem it reminds me of how I feel about my ex. Keep writeing more poems and I beleive that you will get over her just like I said theres more fish in thee sea. If you get the chance can you vote on my poem

  • 19 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    wow u can relly tell the emotion in it. it really shows how u ust grew apart without meaning to or wanting to...so sad and yet so beautifully written. did u show it her?feel free to email me the answer if u dont wana post it or u wana chat somemore...my address is on my profile.
    take care
    xxxLoUxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Nice poem David.Very well written.