Her dreamful world

by Jacqui Armstrong   Apr 5, 2005


Standing there a tear in her eye
She steps off the edge and begins to fly
Over the houses the wind in her face
None of this causes her heart to race

Her watchful eye on the people below
So small like ants they move so slow
The trees in the distance all one big blur
The pain slowly floating away from her

But in reality she’s soaring down
Further, faster, she hits the ground
People all gather but its too late
Her dreamful world her sorrowful fate

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  • 16 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    This was excellent.i could almost feel the pain.very sad indeed.

    But in reality she’s soaring down
    Further, faster, she hits the ground
    People all gather but its too late
    Her dreamful world her sorrowful fate

    this stanza was excellent.
    keep up the good work.
    best wishes
    and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    Wow.. this is fantabulous!! tho its a lil sad..gr8 job.. the rhyme and the flow were perfect.. ur reli talented.. i cud reli see wat was happening.. i reli lyk the last two lines..
    keep up the talent
    take care
    Nouna

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Nice flow and you could almost picture this in your head. I liked this one the best

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Wow, you are turly amazin gi never read a poem like this and i love your style you flow once again is amazing. 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by M MEM

    Woah, very nice, i think a comma in the last line would be good, but its a great poem

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