Not broken but torn

by IWroteYouAPoemOnMyWrist   Apr 7, 2005


You took my heart
and ran away
in my heart
my love for you will forever stay

but you took advantage
of what you stole
you tore my heart
and crushed my soul

i still am in love with you
i don*t no why
I'm still not sure tho
if your worth my tears too cry

I'm so deeply in love
but you love someone else
getting torn too pieces
you have no idea how that felt

this time my heart wasn't*t broken
but torn in half purposely
with out my heart and soul
i don't feel like anything

i should have told him
i didn't say how i felt
all because i didn't*t
he goes to someone else

i can't go back in time
to take chances i didn't take
this is all my fault
everything in my life's a mistake

please just understand
i need too tell you everything
i just am afraid
thats not how you want things too be

yes i no this doesn't have a ending but one hasn't*t happened yet i will make a part two for this!!! when something finally does happened..........................but i still would like too hear what you think about this thats all i want !!! so thanks guys!!!
and if anyone has aim id love too talk(:

please comment I'd love too hear what you say !(: and vote if you'd like too

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    Nice write I loved it. <3333

  • 19 years ago

    by samara

    i like the way you wrote this. very good job. i can really relate because thats how i felt about my ex-boyfriend when he broke up with me but in time eveything will seem so much better and you'll find that someone that your even more happy with. good luck.
    xoxo samara

  • 19 years ago

    by shannon

    hey.... i thought it was great! keep it up!!! :) i gave you a 5/5

    P.S- thanks for commenting on my poem!

    -amanda

  • 19 years ago

    by Noelle k.

    great poem it hit some where with in me.. 5/5
    ~!~Noelle~!~

  • 19 years ago

    by Lashay

    hey thanks for the comment on my poem great poem

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