Trying

by Gemmie Lou   Apr 8, 2005


I’ve been trying not to love you
I’ve been putting up a fight
I’ve been barely holding on
And letting go with all my might
There’s a part of me that’s empty
I know only love can fill
I’m afraid I’ll never find it
And I’m scared to death I will

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  • 18 years ago

    by Rusted x Heart

    I really enjoyed this; sweet and to the point. loved the way you twisted it and changed the entire essence of the poem with the end. Very nicely done!

  • 19 years ago

    by shannon

    wow.. i loved this poem alot. a 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Liam

    brilliant, really cant fault it, good twist at the end to

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