To cry

by Ashley Van Eperen   Apr 9, 2005


I hate my self so much,
Cuz I always think of you
I've tried so hard to move on
But no other guy will do
No matter who they are
Or how cute they may be,
I know that deep inside,
You're the one for me.
Cuz late in the dark of night
You're the one of my mind
Haunting me with your promises
"Its love till the end of time"
Its so hard ya know...
To simply say goodbye
When my heart os so broken
And I just need to cry...

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  • 18 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    this is an awsome poem babe i dunno why people gave it a low rating keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by EoB

    good poem, but once again, to similar to other poems...

    Haunting me with your promises
    "Its love till the end of time"

    that was my fav part...

    Like the other one I've read of you, it flows well, and rhymes okay...

    but please, write proper english...many poets won't take you serious if you write cuz...it seems alltogether unprofessional..

    keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by ~DyingBlackRose~

    Don't hate yourself just because you think about someone all the time. I do it all the time too. It was a really great poem 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by »«¤ß詤»«

    wow
    i loved this poem
    seriously words can't say how much i related to it and loved it i think this is your best! (my opinion anyway) its excellent! so heartfelt and emotional! awsome work!! this is one of my fave poems!
    >>5/5<<
    bec

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    thanks for ur comments u guys! i'll get to urs as soon as i'm done checkin the rest of mine!
    xoxo
    ¤~§Gizmo§~¤

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