Random...

by Eibutsina   Apr 11, 2005


**Just a random piece I wrote after waking up this morning**

Falling...

Falling...

I'm Falling!

Out of control
Need to extract

Uncertainty
Postponment

Dreaming...

Dreaming...

I'm Dreaming!

AND I'M LATE

*Probably not my best but wanted to see what everyone thought of my styles of writing - I'm feeling experimental of late - let me know your opinions - thanks*

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  • 18 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    It was very nice! I really liked the style in which you wrote it! 5.0

  • 19 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Thanks Angela - Ive taken your advice and edited my title - thanks again for your help - always appreciated :o)

  • 19 years ago

    by Angie

    Different but I like it!!! A title, lets see, how about "Random". You said it was a random piece you wrote. Well anyway, I really liked it and look forward to the next one. 5/5

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 19 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Ha! Eirisa...i have dreams like that all the time! Quite scary if you ask me..hmm a title?? Grr I never can come up with one for someone else but when I write they just pop in my head..Anyways I keep telling you how I'm loving that you are trying new stuff!! im enjoying it actually..it keeps me on the edge of my seat wanting to know more..Keep these peices coming!
    Love ya,
    ~Chelsey~

  • 19 years ago

    by Molly Elizabeth

    idk about the title, but i like it... i love that u can try different styles. keep it up!
    much love,
    -Mols

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