thats really sweet and well written xxx

I liked it honey - good piece of work xx

No offense, my darling, it just seems like your rhymes were too easy and simple minded. I think you are capable of much more. The flow was nice but poetry is not all about that. Keep trying. I'm no one to judge.

IN ALL RESPECT
Heather

ps. no vote. I'd rather tell you than vote you down.

God bless you.

this poem is beautiful

beautiful poem of feelings and honest emotions

I've already commented but it improves with each reading, well done once again, keep writing

I liked it a lot! You have it, girl... :)
5/5

wow this is really good 5/5

Exellent poem. I like the way you wright.

For being 15 you write really well. It was another wonderful poem. Please keep at it, it's good to see such lovely poems.

a very touching poem filled with emotion and desire

awww.. breakups are hell.... but you'll get better. great poem though! you must keep writing! you're like... a really good writer!

i like it alot keep up the good work
bye

Amazing poem

Awesum poem ...dats d true love ..