I hate it here

by vanna   Apr 13, 2005


Is anybody out there?
calling out my name
loneliness is all i have
that wasnt my intentional aim

could i screw up any more?
just tell me that I'm wrong
you can hurt my feelings
i wont be breathing for very long

my heart is getting darker
for your love was just a lie
nones looking forward to seeing me
nobody would care if i just died

i think its time i leave this place
being here isn't any fun
i can already see the light
I'm walking toward it 3...2...1

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  • 18 years ago

    by TwistedNightmare

    I like the tone in this poem. It makes me feel an undesireable sorrow. Nice poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jen

    *wow* you read my mind. That's awesome! I love u'r poem, it explains how I feel better than I think I could've ever explained it! Keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by pirateRAWRR

    Great poem... sad but GoOd i lykd it keep up tha awsum wOrk =]

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren

    OMG amzin poem! u hav alot of talent keep it up and think if you did one day give up all of your talent wuld go to waste. if u ever want help just email me...think about it. my fav bit woz :
    i think its time i leave this place
    being here isn't any fun
    i can already see the light
    I'm walking toward it 3...2...1
    love it all tho Loz xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by corrina

    great job thanks for the comment, your poems seem sad, do you base them from yourself? ttfn

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