this is a great poem i can see you put a lot of thought in this I really enjoyed it...Great work hun...Xox Sherrie

OUTSTANDIND POEM!! this poem is mystical and i enjoyed it

outstanding

This has to be one of the best poems i've read, once again a unique and beautiful poem... It's so inspirational and true, i really loved this verse

But of course there was a light,
Shining in the back of my mind...
If believed any of this,
It would be mine alone to find...

Sometime swe listen so much to other we forget to hear ourselves... LOVED IT 5/5

I love this poem. God is good isn't He.
~anne~

WOW! I'm standing and applauding. I have never read any poem, any more beautiful than this one. What a Masterpiece. hugs, lots of love, *Ann*

I really like your poem and i can kindda understand what u are trying to say cuz there is always things u think about twice and think if u should believe or not
-Lady Jaz

There are now words for the poem other an than Excellent!! One of your best. Great rhyming, great flow and above all great message!

I Don't Agree With What It Says,
But It's A Good Poem.

Failed

that is a very good poem. good use of writing i added it to my favorites. well thats all for now. keep on writing.

wow, that is a really deep and meaningful poem. the ending was superb as well as the message it sends out. nicely done.
take care x x

it really reminds me of my poem "Existance of Choice" , well, the ending does but you took it another level. Nice job.

Love
Heather

Excellent message once again skillfully rendered. You compassionately brought the spirituality out of the baseness which has come to consume so much religion with its modern social club mentality.

Oh my goodness its great