Forgive Me

by Carrotgirl   Apr 16, 2005


Heavy burden to carry
For it is shame
I possess no alibi
Guilty I’m to blame

See your Withering shadow
Crumpled muted shattered
Soul drifting away
Void of all that mattered

One chance to help
Yet I keep my distance
One chance lost forever
Condemned by my own silence

Pool of blood you lay
An end sudden and violent
Did you have to die
Now forever silent

Your family wept for you
The hurt and the despair
Please forgive me for I can’t
Guilt too hard to bear

I’m sorry Pat B….my biggest regret
Elise / Elisha

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem, well written and vocabulary was wonderful, deep and very sad, heartfelt piece ,it was totally incredible, you did a marvelous job on it keep it up , your friend Tracy dean, 5/5

    thanks for sharing, and your comments.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kristi lee

    Excellent

  • 17 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    Powerfully written and deeply moving.
    This poem is a stark reminder of the cost of silence.
    Well done.

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Woah! Great read! Veyr descriptive and powerful. Excellent word usage. Keep it up! xx

    Thanks for your comments By the way.
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by -Usmi-

    WoW.....tht was rele incredible...

    thankx for the comments , Elisha

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