The day i died inside

by rachel   Apr 17, 2005


The day i died inside.
you broke my heart,
i should've known you would from the start.
now i can't stop crying,
there's nothing left to stop me from dying.
whats the point in living a life you hate,
when nothings gonna change because its far too late.
so i lifted my knife and began to cut,
but soon i stopped and wondered whats the point?
why kill myself,
when inside,
Ive already died.

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  • 20 years ago

    by themeuneverseen

    This is short ans sooo sad and good! I loved it! Keep up the great work hun!
    Love alwayz....
    hAiLy
    XOXOXOXOX

  • 20 years ago

    by rachel

    thanx u guys, glad u liked da endin sarah keep the comments comin much appreciated thanx bbz xxxx
    and btw thanx 2 ne1 hu added me 2 their faves!!
    xxxx

  • 20 years ago

    by ღ*KiM*ღ

    5/5 I loved the deeper message in this poem, it was really good. ~*~KiM~*~

  • 20 years ago

    by katie!

    I enjoyed the way this flowed, well done, keep writing

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