The story of a young girl

by rachel   Aug 15, 2005


Cut, cut, young girl,
Thought you could make your problems fade,
Seek peace of mind in the glint of a blade.

Cut, cut, young girl,
If only you really could leave your problems behind,
But that was all in your mind.

Cut, cut, young girl,
Gaping wounds is the remedy you need,
Life seems so much easier when you watch yourself bleed.

Cut, cut, young girl,
these beliefs were once mine,
thought i could cut and turn out fine.

Cut, cut, young girl,
If only before you'd lifted the knife you could have seen,
All that you could have, would have been.

Cut, cut, young girl,
You're throwing these chances away,
things won't be alright no matter what you say.

Cut. cut, young girl,
Make the mistake so many made before you,
You'll ruin your life before you're through.

Cut, cut, young girl,
Take it from me,
Cutting isn't worth it, soon you'll see.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lithium

    i like the way you wrote this and the message your sending it great work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost Girl

    You are right cutting isnt worth anything...Great poem I love the repetition and the ideas put across, stay strong, one day everything will be ok...
    xxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by IWroteYouAPoemOnMyWrist

    thanks fro all my comments it means a lot... 5/5 for you and once again thanks, it meansa lot to me ...

    -sabrina

  • 18 years ago

    by SuicideQueen

    very effective with the repitition 5/5!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Joey P

    Very well written, and Im afraid also cause im a cutter and Im afraid i mite go too deep.

    God Bless