Goodbye

by ShadowedPhoenix   Apr 19, 2005


Goodbye sweet angel
but I'm moving on.
I cannot fall behind again,
I need to remain strong!

I don't know what I want,
I'll never know what I need!
But i want Independence
and I need to be free!

I will not fail on what I set out to achieve,.
I will not fall behind
or give up on my dreams!
So I'm moving on!

Goodbye beautiful baby,
I hope you'll be fine.
You should remember LOVE,
It's true but for us it wasn't the right time!

Forgive me if I break your heart
But I must now choose:
Choose to love you,
Or choose to leave and move on?

I've made my decision,
there's no turning back!
I'm leaving, I must
Goodbye angel AND I'm never coming back!

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  • 18 years ago

    by pseudo

    Wow..a real heartbreaker but heartfelt this poem really tugs on your heart strings..lol i used heart to many times..this poem is sad =(.. but very well written.. i liked how you didnt actually say anythng about suicide instead you said that goodbye and you're never comming back..[was it about suicide when you wrote about moving on?] well anyways great write! leep it up

    --emotionless19.*

  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    This is terrific and it's beautifully written. The format is well done as well... I think I'm gonna cry...keep up the good work..5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Parting is such a sad thing to do! This has been expressed so well in your poem. Good work.

    Warmest regards,

    Steve

  • 19 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    good poem i guess

  • 19 years ago

    by Mark Coates

    that is truly amazing

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