Where Did I Go Wrong

by The Flame Within   Apr 21, 2005


Quivering lip
shaking knees
nose cold to the tip
begging pleas

hands tied tight
words spoken
asking for light
strength broken

asking for love
wanting to be free
yelling above
GOD, CANT YOU HEAR ME

i pray, and pray
asking for joy
not sure what to say
feel like a young boy

eyes close tight
trying to hold back
tears hit the light
strength i lack

one follows another
trying to be strong
as tears break each other
where did i go wrong

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  • 19 years ago

    by girlii797

    I like it a lot.
    i love your poems, i think it is great that you aren't scared to write how you feel!
    Keep writing!

    STAY STRONG! People are rooting for ya.

    Later~

  • 19 years ago

    by Ally xo

    hey nickxoxo sorry if i haven't written u a comment back... my internet wasn't working for some time now...but u haven't changed at all still an awsome writer read most of ur new poems but this one is my favourite i love it.... wow the ryming was great and i liked one part " god can't u hear me' that was amazing cuz it is so true sometimes i wonder that...anyway i hope to talk to u lata.......

    ~Alyson~

  • 19 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    WOW! This was awesome, nick. I like this one, a lot. I hope you are ok, tho! Great write, hon, keep it up, thanx for commenting on my work!
    Car

  • 19 years ago

    by |-Turkeylove-|

    WOW! deep! i like this one! keep writing.
    a new one on!
    much love and a hug,
    krista j.

  • 19 years ago

    by ---AL---

    Nicely written, Good stuff, please check out my poems let me know what you think.

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