by Michael Mantione Apr 23, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
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I have hidden this deep inside |
by Blade
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Another great poem |
by Nyx
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Hmm mysterious nice work |
by Britt
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This is an amazing poem. Very emotional! |
by David
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Well crimson poet, I found this poem to be, as it was categorized, dark. As such I have no choice but to commend you on your acheviement. However, I would like to give you one small suggestion: The hatred and sadness rut is deeply effecting on people, yet it cannot grow. I used to be a "self-mutilator"/ depressed child. But I could only think of so many ways to say "I am in pain". I think you have the potential to be great, as soon as you make that message that moves them. Good work overall, 4. |
by Britt
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I don't know you but thats amazing and keep it up!! |