Comments : Foreplay

  • 18 years ago

    by Matthew

    I truely love this poem, and I hope that all you ladies out there enjoy it. I hope it does it for you. If you really like it please vote and leave comments.

    Thanx, Matthew

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥CRIMSONxX♥

    lol good poem, very hot! ;)
    had a definate affect on me :p
    Keep up the good work, you should write more :)
    xxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    Thanks for the comment. That's the first one I've ever written so its much appreciated that you liked it and left a comment. Neways this was a great poem...made me want my bf to haul his ass over here. lol. >3jess

  • 18 years ago

    by Nanita

    oh my god!!! that was really good! damn i wish i was that chick!!!!!! oh my god!! keep writin and PLEASE submit. DAMN!!!! good job, matthew

  • 18 years ago

    by Nanita

    oh yeah please comment on my poems i would surely appreciate them.

    thanks

  • 18 years ago

    by Left-Forever-No-More-Trying

    omg, i loved it, it actaully got me going and at the end where it said to breath because i got so into the poem i did, keep up with the good work, please comment on one of mine, but you don't have to.
    love hannah

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily

    write more omg that was great

  • 18 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Wow. There's not much more to say than that. It was excellent. Keep it up! :-)

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Arnold

    Hay matthew fuking awsome poem. very very hott and tingely. keep it up. and thank for the comment i am going to add you to my favorite. well peace out man. i would give it a 10 but i couldnt so i gave it a 5/5.

    xox Ashmo To The Extreme xox

  • Wow, that was hot. extremely well written
    lol
    well thnx for your comments.
    You were right i love your work!

    jemma

  • 18 years ago

    by Liz

    makes me hot and shiver just thinking about it your awsome keep wrighting like this

  • 18 years ago

    by hidden under lies

    hey this is REALLY good. im gonna put you on my favorites list and i hope to hear LOTS more from you good job.
    check out more of mine if you want i have ALOT lol. love always, me lol savannah

  • 18 years ago

    by sinister

    whey to go, man. whey to go.

  • 18 years ago

    by MJ

    Gr8 poem! Made my 2 friends VERY HORNY!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Marisa Lishay

    yo freaky ass! that poem was crazy! two thumbs up for you. you know how to bring back memories!!!!!!!!!(marisa)

    Ay folk! That shit sounds like sumthin I would write!!!!!!!!! You sure you haven't been folloing me????????????? (Street Lyric)

  • 18 years ago

    by samara

    wow!! i really really like that lol no joke. it kinda put me in the mood lol. very very well writtin. i look foward to reading more of your poems. now on to part 2. good job!
    xoxo samara

  • 18 years ago

    by Destiny77

    Thanks honey for commenting on my poem Our First Date. This poem was HOT HOT HOT! OMG HOT!! Total 5/5!!!! Keep it up! Just awesome!

  • 18 years ago

    by Cimara

    love it!! great job, cant wait to read the 2nd installment!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Wow now that was a hot poem! You did an amazing job with just the right amount of detail. You could almost feel it just by reading it! Loved it! Take Care! Brooke 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by shannon

    another great poem..5/5 keep it up