Broken Promises

by Fighter (Ariane L.)   Apr 24, 2005


The day you walked away,
You took my heart out of my chest
You darkened it,
And you tore it apart.

You told me that I was the one,
You promised you would never leave.
I sit here, broken promises
Echoing in my head.

You told me you loved me,
You told me you wouldn't leave.
Shattered glass around me.
Broken promises.

This shattered picture,
Memories of the past.
Shattered in broken glass,
Memories of your broken promises.

© Fighter

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  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    Ariana here again. I decided to read some of your old poems and I came across this one and it's heartbreaking. But that's good cuz you make heartache seem better because there are other people that have it and it makes you realize that other people can have this pain just like U. GR8 job. Catch U l8er! PEACE

  • 19 years ago

    by Jeff

    Good job that touched my heart.Thanks for your comments on mine.I appreciate.Jeff

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    i love it...great write. i could just picture myself with shattered glass around me, just feeling lonely and hurt. very good poem!!

    love always...

  • 19 years ago

    by ?

    I liked how you used broken glass and a broken heart, a beautiful way of describing the pain, keep it up xxx

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