Do you see his face?

by Jessica   Apr 28, 2005


For each stanza, answer the question with the first person that comes to mind.

You want to know he’s there,
To smile without disgrace,
To be with you everywhere,
Do you see his face?

You want to hear his voice,
Flowing at its soft and gentle pace,
He’s never your second choice,
Do you see his face?

You want to make him sing,
Help him win the race,
You want to crown him king,
Do you see his face?

You can’t help crying when he’s gone,
Gather your tears in a vase,
He makes the hours seem so long,
Do you see his face?

You want to see him smile,
Leaving frowns without a trace,
Make his heart sing like a childs,
Do you see his face?

You want him there with you,
Your love free to embrace,
Making you not one, but two,
Do you see his face?

I know its terrible, I just wanted something to write! lol Don’t worry about voting badly, I know it stinks! lol

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  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    Nice work. I really, really liked it. (And it doesn't stink!) :)

  • 18 years ago

    by B4BY BLU3 X

    Hey I really like this, woow!! It was great, I liked the way you asked us to imagine someone for each stanza. Well done and thanks for commenting on mine. Keep up the good work! xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Amit

    Nice write, Jessica. Very well written.

    5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

    Nidhi's Amit.