Atonement

by Aken Sol   Apr 29, 2005


Strange,
How the Littliest things can
Haunt one's dreams.

Guilt,
Festering in the back
Of one's mind.

Just one small sin
Drenched in black
That lingers and scratches
Screeches and stabs
At one's life.

From time to time
One can still see her eyes.
When the night peaks
In the ridance of companion.

What he wants most
IS for his mistake
to be erased
Impossible.
So he sits out the night

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  • 18 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    very nice work i loved it
    ~HazE

  • 19 years ago

    by Lance Hardy

    Lol, is it just a coincidence that you ended this poem with night, and the section of ours with night? Or are you addicted to night...interesting. Ridance should be riddance, other than that spelling is fine. Comment on whether its good or not? Hmm..

  • 19 years ago

    by chloe

    great poem 5/5 x