Achieve My Fate

by EpithetPoet   Apr 29, 2005


Through the tears that now stream down
Turning the delicate lace of my saddened soul brown

You look at me with utter disgust
When minutes ago was simply pure lust

Even as i bleed out your name for all view
You refuse to admit that the problem was you

You lied, you cheated, you hurt, you yell
Every time you beat me brought me closer to Hell

Yet you never even cared what you put me through
Never even thought what fist against flesh would do

What hurts more than the wounds saturated in crimson demise
Are the tears that pound the ground of the hate in your eyes

So much love we went through to achieve such hate
With my blood on your arms i achieve my fate

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  • 19 years ago

    by Gemini

    wow...amazing

  • 19 years ago

    by Elissa

    Awsome poem, I loved it. can't wait to read your next. 5/5
    love always,
    Elissa

  • 19 years ago

    by A Broken Bleeding Soul

    Great poem... very well written. 5/5

    ~ Tina

  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    This is amazing my friend. Lines of reflection, remorse, hatred, and 'fate'. Well done,

    ||Kal.