I Was Waiting

by Carmen   May 1, 2005


You left me last week,
Leaving my heart broken and weak,
The only thing that kept me going was the thought of you,
Because I truly believe our love is true.
You told me you love me,
That when you left, I'd finally be free,
You said I deserve more,
And a young, foolish, man so poor,
Doesn't deserve a girl like me,
But I really don't care, can't you see?
I love you for you,
Not for what you can bring through.
Yesterday, you came back to me,
And then I could see,
That you love me no matter how far away,
Our love for each other will always stay.
Although I didn't know if you'd be returning,
My love for you is always churning.
I waited so we could be together,
Living happily... forever.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    this was a good poem. good job

  • 18 years ago

    by erikka baby

    I loved this poem. The rhyming was exact, and it flowed so well. Your such an amazing writer. Keep up the good work! xX

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    loved this poem it was great. keep up the good writing. so true that why i liked it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    wow lovely poem.. sounds like you really love him!

  • 18 years ago

    by tabithaa

    Awesome...