That night i died.

by Dani   May 2, 2005


Silently i cry,
as the night falls in around me.

i have no life,
no string to bound me.

our lives are balanced,
on a long stick.

and when God cuts the string,
we feel like shi_t.

he pushes us to the point,
of absolutely no return.

this is where our lives,
take a dramatic turn.

we lose the one we loved,
the one we gave our most valued possession to.

and what does he do,
laughs and mocks us like shiatsus.

now i cut my wrists,
a line for your lies.

this one may be last,
and last I'm going to try.

i look for a major vein,
and finally its found.

i call you and tell you,
i am hell bound.

i tell you i know i wasn't good enough,
that i am just a bit_ch.

you just laugh and tell me,
i ain't gonna do sh_it.

thats when the tear drops,
that when I've had enough of your lies.

this one hit the vein,
that day i died.

and as i look up from hell,
this is what i saw.

another girl you hurt,
killing herself, and i watched her fall.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Dani

    thx guys!~!@

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Arnold

    Great job dan dan. I loved it too. I love ya dan see you at school!!!

    xox Ashmo To The Extreme xox

  • 18 years ago

    by yessie

    Girl i was reading this and it was just ok but when i got to the end it made me love it!!!!!! damn i give u a 5