Suicidal Addiction

by Flea   May 3, 2005


Breathing in the fire,
Inhaling thick murky tar.
Gasping in liquid death,
Diluting pure essence.

Breathing out the smoke,
Exhaling dense steam.
Fumes that pollute,
Vapours that kill.

Death in disguise.
Pain in pleasure.
Addiction's a disease.
Slow suicide.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Suicidal-Addict

    This is deep man, i like. yes but um r u talking bout smoking?

  • 18 years ago

    by goot

    woot rock on with your frock on i need to write more lolz hahahaha eric is sex

  • 19 years ago

    by yup

    A great poem. The metaphors you've used are excellent.
    Love always,
    Kelly

  • 19 years ago

    by Kristen

    Different, it really deserved a 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by RapMastaT

    I quite like the *cant think of word*,erm the,oh darn it,its good,I like the symbolism as well.Peowpeow,cya @ skool,u kno I frikin will LOL.:P