Tears

by Wasted Fake Smiles   May 7, 2005


Tears, fall down like rain,
Splattering onto the floor.
It can't take much more,
but neither can I.
I cant stop crying,
There's no point in trying.
My life is a mess,
I'm always alone,
I feel so unloved,
Where's my man from above?
Will he show up
Or is he someone else's?
Why am I the center of insults and jokes.
It hurts so bad, it makes me sick,
Life has to get better pretty darn quick....

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    I like how this is short and compact, and still has alot to it. The words you have choosen are very effective at portraying your feelings and the descriptions work well. I'd suggest changing the last line because it sounds as if it was put there just to complete the rhyme and so the poem doesn't end as well as it could.

  • 18 years ago

    by ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ

    This is such a good poem...i know exactly what u mean...but i prayed 4 my angel 4rm above and i got him...
    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by §Sweet2Unique§

    GREAT POEM! N I KNOW WUT U MEAN! 5/5

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