Empathy

by »«¤ß詤»«   May 10, 2005


I look beyond that pain
the tears in which she drowns
I see beneath her soul
far beyond the frowns

alone in the dyeing darkness
she sits and cries out her eyes
If only for a minute
I could take away the lies

the screeching of the door
Is all that can be heard
over her quiet weeps and sobs
that keeps her vision blurred

I look into my soul
and try to understand her grief
feel what shes lost
while I watch her sink like lost leaf

I start to read her spirit
deep down in her inner core
I see things I never
thought I'd see before

*I had to write this for English and i had guide lines to follow so its not that great and sorry everyone Ive been really busy and have had a massive writers block*

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  • 18 years ago

    by EoB

    This one is very good...

    NIce story, but it doesn't flow perfectly...Nevertheless, great job

  • 18 years ago

    by EoB

    This one is very good...

    NIce story, but it doesn't flow perfectly...Nevertheless, great job

  • Beauitifly Written~!!! 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    I love the ending! This poem was very well done showed emotion and flowed beautifully! Another amazing write! 5/5 Take Care! Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashlynn

    That is ok..I like it
    Check me out
    Morana

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