Comments : Stay

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    give it to her babe. its rele gud
    ~Freak~

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Wow another amazing poem! I reall enjoy reading your poems. You have a lot of talent! Take Care! Another 5/5 Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    this is a great poem!!!!! i can relate!!!! keep writing!!!
    ps
    would u mind commenting and rating

    you made me want to live

    thnx 4 ur time :)

    *~peace and love~*

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    Another great poem! 5.0 ♥

  • 18 years ago

    by W H O R E

    Aww, very nicely written. I give it a 5/5. I really like this verse:

    you're feeling cold and you feel all alone
    I hate to see how distant you've grown

    Well done.
    -xx-
    Much Love
    Broken

  • 18 years ago

    by Life Is Beautiful

    awesome poem!!
    e-mail me sometime!
    cutting_edge_lover@yahoo.com

  • 18 years ago

    by Wintersolstice

    Reeeeaaaalllly like this poem and well done on getting four rhymes in each part of the poem, must have been hard work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Rolo

    Great job. It's obvious that it came from the heart. 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    great poem once again, i love them so much plz dont stop writing!
    p.s.im going to add you to my favorites:)

  • 18 years ago

    by LAST RONIN

    great poem, very well writen.. just a suggestion if you can change this part it would even make it better... live let it be

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    amazing work...heartfelt is always nice...

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by the middle

    wow! i have a poem with the same title, but wow! yours is soooo much better! lol
    amazing poem. i'm adding you to my favourites!
    xoxoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Bloomed Rose

    I loved the rhyming! it was a very good poem! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelly

    Wow your poems are amazing! Im loving them. This poem is brilliant! I loved the last stanza, think its sums up everything perfectly.

    Kelly
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by ashley

    You're feeling cold and you feel all alone
    I hate to see how distant you've grown
    the light in your eyes now cold as stone
    and all your dreams out the window they're thrown
    i really loved this part best cuz i was the other person once and i kno how it hurts to be cheated on...5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    This is so dam good. gee. the words you use are so unique.

    i gave you a 5. just cause of your word choice. cause the words do in the end make the poem either good or bad. you made your poem good, no excellent. 5

    david

  • 17 years ago

    by sarah

    You are now added 2 my fav's excellent poem 5/5 hurry up n get writing, cant wait 4 ur nxt poem x

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    If you love somebody, Set her free ... Don't worry, she will come back....hehehe...keep it up..muah..

  • 15 years ago

    by Ria

    Why is it death that you may be choosing
    Is dancing on the edge what you find amusing
    I just need an answer I'm not accusing

    brilliant way to say this!
    also loved this one:

    the one that helped me make it through
    she took my gray skies and made them blue

    very nice rhyming and flow!