My Suicide Depressions

by Poetic Tragedy08   May 12, 2005


I stand here in pieces
Looking up at the sky
The blood starts to drip
Pouring out of my eyes
Where once heaven dwelt
Now all is gone
Hell takes me over
To me, You're no longer fond
That's enough to wreck my life
Enough to have me kill
Destroy my bloody veins
And let you never feel
Rushing in my veins
The blood pushes through
To death and letting go
You'll feel this too
The wickedness inside me
Overcomes my rotten soul
It all feels natural
Another to the death toll
I now see a light
Let's pray its a train
Run over my corpsed body
And let dry my veins
This you'll see
How I'll move on
Find me in the morning
In the crack of dawn
It'll be too late to save me
Too late to come back
I'll die a bloody man
Don't let your life lack

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  • 17 years ago

    by *my heart will bleed*

    Really awsome poem one of the best ones i have read x x

  • 18 years ago

    by Wintersolstice

    Confusing but full of feelings which often are. Good job. X

  • 18 years ago

    by paulina.♥

    I loved this poem. Very deep. Excellent poem, dear. Keep writing and stay strong. 5/5

    -Ice

  • 18 years ago

    by otto

    it was written good, to me though the flow was a bite off
    good poem tough, liked the way you use words it was good the story was good

  • 18 years ago

    by Lyla

    wow thats another great poem/ I feel bad for not saying more but theres not much to say but wow, great job!