Am I...?

by M J U   May 13, 2005


Why can't anyone hear me?
Are my cries muffled
in the depth of my broken heart?
My soul, a well, with no wishing
left for a penny.
Maybe it is only I
who hears the screams
of terror and agonizing pain
that lives within my person?
Why can't anyone see me?
Am I ghost of the present,
unseen by anyone
who looks toward me?
Am I truly someone?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    This was a good concept but it lacked alot of power to carry it. It was almost like you just scratched the surface and then left us wanting more. I think if you were to think strong on how to set this up as a story your true emotions would flow out. Oh well take care and nice attempt...

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    Great job....as usual:)

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