It Won't End Here

"I still want us to be friends,
But you need to care for me too.
You never seem happy to see me,
I just need to talk to you."

Well-written, great flow and rhyming choice. This really clearly says that your friend needs to step up and be a better friend.

"We’ve had such great times together.
Don’t throw all of it away.
Show me we’re still friends
And that’s how it will stay."

Again, nice job. you are very willing to keep this friendship from fading away, it shows how great a friend you are.

"Don’t turn your back on me now.
I haven’t done anything wrong.
I’ll try to make things up to you.
So please just follow along."

Beautiful ending, that sums your whole message up nicely. 5/5 from me, and I hope things get better between you two. Take care..

WOW! It really good, It reminds me of a similar situation.......

Your poems are all so awesome! I love reading them. Keep it up!
~Smile~

I almost cried when I read this one. I can really relate to it. My best friend abandoned me because I dress differently now. 5/5 Keep writing and stay strong. If you need someone to talk to, send me a private message.

-Ice

wow. this poem is completely amazing and beautifully written. you have such an amazing talent and i love reading your work.
5/5
love always,
paulette