I Played Violin

by Darien   May 17, 2005


I Played Violin

I play my wrists like a violin,
and every vein is a note.
I'll write you a song,
about a boy who died for love.

Everyday he wakes up alone,
without a care in the world.
Never heard a ring from his phone,
he hopes to hear from his girl.

At night he falls asleep crying,
wishing for things to be good.
His heart in his throat dying,
and his words are misunderstood.

The walls painted blood red,
his wrists the paint brush.
Thinks he's better off dead,
for losing his first crush.

The radio plays a sad song,
he plays the beat on his wrist.
Wonders what he's done wrong,
as he clenches his fist.

Visions of her haunt his mind,
leaving him for another guy.
Another love he cannot find,
he's scared by her deadly lie.

The song is near it's end,
and he is slowly going.
The last vein for his friend,
she won't end up knowing.

Violins are now playing,
another song has begun.
His body there laying,
in pools that he sung.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    I found one =D

    But, wow. This is sad in a way. Really good though, I wish my first few poems were as good as this lol.

    But I liked how you used he played the violin on his wrist, thats good imagination lol. Awesome poem!! 5/5

    .x.TaLeEe.x.

  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    That settles it, you're going on my favourite's list. Damn you, I believe this is the first poem that nearly got me in tears. It's just so beautiful.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~~Fire Angel~~

    Seems u need to cheer up as well :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Kittie

    WOW, I really liked this one, it had alot of meaning and It sonds/looks like it took you time to write it. Great job! Lots O' Love
    BloodRedRose

  • 18 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    That was very unique, the way you used a different veiw of things to give an image that otherwise would have been 'ordinary'. some of it was a little hard to follow immediatly, so 4/5, great job!