I'm a wreck

by ElegantlyWasted   May 19, 2005


You ask me how i am feeling,
And my answer remains the same,
"Nothings wrong... I'm okay"
When inside there's a stinging pain.

I cover up my mascara stains,
Chuck those bottles under my bed,
You can't find out about the hurt,
That he's scratched into my head.

I won't let you suffer and worry,
About how I'll win this fight,
And please don't hate or judge me,
If i decide to take my life.

The heartache just won't leave,
It's like I'm destined to be in pain,
Forever in eternity i shall bleed,
For the world to laugh in shame.

Pull up my sleeves and look,
At the rawness of my arm,
Hours i spent last night scratching,
To remove those stains of harm.

Please stop looking at me,
Like i need to get some help,
All i want is to be left alone,
In my room, BY MYSELF!

So with this final crying plea,
I'll ask you all to forget,
Just turn your backs and walk,
Before you realize I'm a wreck.

- Just another vent; I'm so angry.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    that was amazing just...wow...just..yea im in awe. its so perfect and i can relate so much to it...its so full of emotion and and...wow lol
    ~Freak~

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Aww sweetie this poem touched my heart, it is so strongly written and I can feel your frustrations in it. You are an amazing writer and I love your poems, especially because I can relate so much to them. It's ok to be a wreck, I am too, but just remember those lines you have on your profile:

    What you feel is what you are
    and what you are is beautiful

    Don't you forget!!! Goo goo dolls lyrics are so touching!!!

    *Love always Sabrina*

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    excellent poem! but i'll never turn my back on you! if your a wreck thats ok, hopefully i can help. i wish i could help more then just use these words 1,000's miles away from you! but i'm always here, whether your a wreck or not!

    ~PLP~ lots of hugs and love~

  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    AMAZING!!! Listen, I'm not sure I can ask if you're ok bcuz when you're mad it kinda lasts awhile...but I hope you're alright. TAKE CARE:->

  • 18 years ago

    by Xo The Forgotten One oX

    wow! amazing! wish i was that good!

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