Romeo and Juliet curse

by Christopher Liau   May 20, 2005


Juliet, how I love thee so,
Everyday I love thee more,
Seeing you, my face will glow,
Gaze all day, eyes never too sore.

I want to tell you how much I do,
Yearn for love, crave to be,
In your heart, I should pursue,
Oh when will you notice me?

Romeo how I love thee so,
By your side, where I belong,
Together I think my love would grow,
Every morning to hear our song.

I wish to show, but I am blind,
I yearn for love, I crave to be,
In your heart, in your mind,
Oh when in time will you kiss me!

Life too short, condemned alone,
Without your love I cannot exist,
I’ll end my life, never will moan,
For you don’t see me, I can’t be missed.

© Christopher Fowler
20th May 2005

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Nice & dramamtic...i like the way u rhyme..

  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    I can't stop reading your poems now, it like a new obession.

    "Juliet, how I love thee so,
    Everyday I love thee more,
    Seeing you, my face will glow,
    Gaze all day, eyes never too sore."

    This first stanza was a bit weak, I think you could do better than this. =)

    "Life too short, condemned alone,
    Without your love I cannot exist,
    I’ll end my life, never will moan,
    For you don’t see me, I can’t be missed.'

    This was my favourite stanza, I especially adore the last line. It pulled the whole poem together.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 18 years ago

    by Katie McCullick

    Ahhhhh romeo and juliet is my favorite "a rose by any other name"....arbaon is the name of my string quartet I am in is...i play the violin...definate 5...
    Katie

  • 18 years ago

    by -*AlLiSoN*-

    wOw...that was really good, i don't kno what else to say, but I really liked it

Read All Comments (4)

More Poems By Christopher Liau