Fornever Friends

by Arora   May 23, 2005


Talking were we
O so sweetly
then she came along;
She took you away
From then on I was kept away

No one to be with
but me myself and I
To bad you couldn't see
all those tears I crie

I loved you to death
'till after the end
I thought we'd be together
and be very best friends

We could've been together
and called it Forever Friends
But now there is a new name;
Fornever Friends

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  • 18 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    that was excellent

  • 18 years ago

    by Ria

    I think you should get beyond friendship poems...show us what you can do, and remember, big poets never write something as they feel it in a second.They let it grow so as it will represent them even if time passes.You need to give your poems time.This is a good poem,but it needs work I think!Kisses sweetie!

  • 18 years ago

    by M J U

    Friendship has it's ups and downs. If this is for the now, ex-best friend, hopefully she will read it.

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    again the ryming...but good poem i no how you feel..keep it up x

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    Your writing is fluffly to say the least no real power to it, good suggestion write about something out of the norm and paint us a picture with each word that passes through you hand. Give us a message show us your hurt take your work to a whole different level then you will be on your way to be a great writer take care...

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