Untitled The Second

by Amanda   May 24, 2005


( please read untitled before you read this one so you get it)

Together in the bed we lay
There our souls will forever stay
Together forever and before
Even though we can’t laugh or talk any more
We loved each other so very much
I knew he had the special touch
We were together until the end
At first I thought he was just my friend
But he turned out to be so much more
I would never have loved anyone like that before
He was like my Romeo and I his Juliet
I will never forget the day we met
We knew each other since we were two
I knew I would never find anyone like you
If our hearts could beat just one last time
I would tell you I loved you
But we’re not on Earth we’re in heaven
Even though I did this for you
And I could take just one thing back
It would be meeting you
Even though that was the best thing that ever happened
You caused too much pain
Seeing you with her every second
even though we both knew it wasn't right
I knew you were no Romeo and I no Juliet
You should have told me sooner
So then we could’ve been together
But we cant for I made the biggest mistake of my life
Only if I could have one day be your wife
But that was only a dream
And never would be reality
Because we are gone
And never will see each other again

By: Amanda

* I thought this wasn't a really good poem and i started out rhyming and didn't finish that way so please if you can, can you comment and vote on it and tell me what you really think! thanks! *

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  • 18 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    hey, this is sad but happy at least i think as well, the person i loved said they wanted to die with me, be with me for eternity, but it was all a lie. but anywho.... it wasnt a bad poem, u need to have more faith in yourself! ur a good writer! :) *~peace and love~*
    ps please rate and comment on 'take a bow' and 'i know im to blame' thnx ;)