His Friends, Her Friends

by AshBnash   May 24, 2005


His friends are upset
they say he's not the same.
They shouldn't fret,
he was lost before she came.

They can't stand it
to see him with her.
They have a fit
because their love is pure.

Is it her fault,
because she took him away?
They come to a halt,
and refuse to stay.

It's amazing to think
That her friends say similar things:
She's begun to sink,
and she's lost her wings.

She's not the same person,
or so her friends say.
She becomes less and less fun
each and every day.

His life has been hard,
He's tried to hide
how he's been scarred
so about himself he's lied.

He doesn't even know
who he is inside.
He was his own foe
and he needed a guide.

Her life, though simple
compared to the other's
was in a kind of lull,
as she hid under covers.

I think the reason
that they have each other
is that in due season
they will find themselves in the other

They must work as one,
and soon in some way,
clear as the sun,
they will see the light of day,

So, AJ, I know
that it's hard to see,
when you've been so low,
who you really can be.

Just listen to your heart
They don't know what's inside
I hope we never part,
so in you i can abide.

I know it kinda sucks, and it's kinda long, but tell me what you think anyways. thanks.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~*You are my only one*~

    Hey Ashley this poem is really good! I am really happy that you and AJ are together. By the way this is his friend Lauren from his party! yea....but you are a really great poet, keep it up! -Lauren

  • 18 years ago

    by Reflection | noitcelfeR

    ASHLEY!!! that was great!! I LOVE YOU!!!!! I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!! you know exactly how it is, but i want to talk to you about something in here. It was great!!! don't ever say your poems suck ever again!! awesome job babe!! :-D

  • 18 years ago

    by cant sleep

    by the way....5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by cant sleep

    im dont really want to say anything but you said to say what i think. you guys were cute. but if i were to get a list from people about how a.j has changed, you would be able to see. he isnt the same person alright? i know what he's been through. i know (well, knew) everything about him. he told me he cut before he told you. he tells me everything before he tells you, and you know what? im nice, i tell him that it would be ok if he told you, bcuz relationships are built on trust. he's like my older brother. ever since we broke up, we've gotten closer. and soo much happened this year (yes, you included) and he has changed. i feel like i never knew him. never. and i was scared this would happen. im not going to legacy next year, so you'll b done with me. you wont have to worry about me hugging him anymore. and during the summer, well...i hope you guys have fun. -nancy by the way, stop giving me dirty looks, they dont do crap.

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