Lonely

by *~*Heart.Shaped.Rose~*~   May 26, 2005


I stare out the window at the passing scene
My mind drifting to all i have seen
Feeling so small when no bodies there
To fill the silence of the empty chair
I look to my left, another lonely soul
Thinking the thoughts of the life that she stole
Voices drift towards my ears
Empty laughs of my sniggering peers
Infront of me only single heads
Thinking of when they can fall on their beds
Silent music playing from above
Songs of happiness, peace and love
Feeling, none of them have i ever felt
All they want is another hit under their belt
The longest silence i have ever known
So many people yet i feel so alone.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Corrie

    Good job! I thought it was really good even with the little mistakes.. And Im soo sorry that you feel alone, but know that God is always with you, you cant see him, and u might not even feel his presence, but He is there, and He knows how you feel, Hes sees all your hurt and pain, and He loves you so much, He will never leave you, even if the whole world leaves you, he wont, you can always count on him! Stay strong! *KISSES*~Corrie 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Arora

    it sounds good... but in the secnd line it says "My ind drifting to all o have seen..." I was a little confused about the "ind and o"

  • 18 years ago

    by steve

    it sucks that you feel so alone, hopefully someday youll feel the songs from above, try to fix the spelling mistakes and I would insert an "I" between have and ever in this line
    Feeling none of them have ever felt
    lots of emotion, good job

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