by Jaime May 26, 2005
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
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I never thought I would say this |
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Jaime jaime jaime, that was brillient. heart felt. i can't quite decide if i like the four or the fifth stanzer more, but they're both superb. but my favorite line was definately 'Haha, he's wrong, so forget it'. once again you had a good ending, and i like it for the same reason as the other one. |
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;o wow very well done hun, this really shows a lot of emotion and its VERY expressive! |
by Ruby K P
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Wow - great poem. Really shows that even negative relationships can have some sort of a positive impact. If we take every bad relationship as an 'experience' it can only make us stronger. Then when we move on, we know what to look for. I love it - i think the message is graet - girl power all the way! 5/5 xxx |
by Jaime
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Um, nope J@DE, that is exactly what I meant to put..... |
by Dawson
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wow that was very good |