Morbid lies

by Chad   May 30, 2005


Suffocated by all the lies.
No escaping the inevitable goodbye's.
The morbidity grows.
Your morality slows.

The dark mortal night.
The oblivious let it take me without a right.
Obscured lies told by you.
Will the ripple affect me too?

The binding opaque light.
Fooled by the blind sight.
Incompetence will bring the end to all.
Why do you fear the tantalizing fall?

No longer buying the morbid lies of man.
Forsaken away by the clan.
Looking into the mesmerizing light.
Turning away in personal spite.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    A brilliant use of voacabulary here, your diction (word choose) and syntax (order of your words) really worked together well in this poem to bring out a great over all effect. Over all I've loved your poetry, thanks for the invite to read it.

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    This poem is geniuos..love it. Everything about this poem is rigght dotn change a thing not even a single word! This is amazing...vrry deep. BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN. one more I LOVE IT and i am off.

    LISSA

  • 18 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    Ok, that there was bloody awesome, I love how you used the words damn I'ma need to take some lessons from you lol

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    It sounds like u put soo much thought into this poem. u could really feel the it. the rhythm was right on. good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    You commented on so many of my poems, and never returned the favor...so I shall.
    This is a wonderful poem..You have an amazing way a writing.

    -xDarkSuicidex

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