Forgiven

by Rachele   Jun 2, 2005


Friends forever i know you care
Otherwise would you still be there
Round the clock time ticks away
Given space and the time of day
I now your sorry amends i made
Vows of friendship weren't left in
.....................the shade
Even though what you did hurt
Never realized you were also burnt

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  • 18 years ago

    by tabithaa

    good!!

  • 18 years ago

    by B4BY BLU3 X

    I liked this. It was short but good, and also got ur message across more effectively. Well done and thanks for ur lovely comment on mine. Take care -xx-

  • 18 years ago

    by T

    hey i liked your poem this is rose i chatted with you in the chat room.... Well keep up the great work:) comment me too!!

  • 18 years ago

    by mike

    nice poem

  • 18 years ago

    by sexykiki06

    hey i didnt get it that much just a liltle but good keep writing

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