No one knows me

by celi   Jun 2, 2005


No one knows what's my favorite color
and what's in my head
no one knows what's my favorite odor:
vanilla, or the smell of toasted bread

no one knows who i really am
or if i'm OK with how i look like
no one knows if i like strawberry jam
or if i know how to strike

no one knows i need a true best friend
and no one can accept me as i am
no one knows why i'm crying
and no one's even asking!

no one knows how much i am depressed
and how much i wanna die
now one knows that i'm obsessed
of the need to say to my life goodbye

no one knows why i love my sister so much
or who is my latest crush
no one knows what's the reason why
i want so much to die

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  • 17 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    Oh wow i really like this poem. good job. it was written well. and idk yet the girl didnt post who won yet :[

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    Hey gurl you really know how to write and I know what you mean sometimes ppl just dont know what going on! Well I really loved your poem keep writing though!!! ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by Danai

    Heyyy! another EXCELLENT poem.... u were born to be a poet (les vagues qui deferlent sur les rochers...LoL)REALLY! anyway, i'm sorry u feel that way.... i've just started knowing u better and sincerely i hope i'll manage to make u feel better..... i looooove u!!!! polla polla filakia!!! (min ksexnas pos opote me xreiasteis i'll be here 4 u!!!) xxx ~~**~~

  • 19 years ago

    by edsel

    hey there's so much self-incrimination here.. cheer up girl.. edsel's here...
    life is still wonderfull afterall.

  • 19 years ago

    by Juliana

    see...ur friends love u...u dont have to go through that in ur life..ur most probably still young and have a lot to experience.I tried to take my own life once, and laugh at myself now.Life changes and so do u and ur friends, so take care and keep smiling...
    that was a very sweet and good poem...